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PostPosted: 2014-09-16, 18:48    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

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Since the forum has gone quiet I thought I'd nip in and share something!
OK no purists please…I know these are only haiku in the sense that they contain 17 syllables.
Earlier in the summer I tried to write down how I felt as I practiced at the bottom of my garden, where I am lucky enough to have a wildlife pond.

A near perfect note
By a wild pond
Will still the turmoil of my mind.

As the warbler sings and
The damselfly lays her eggs
I breathe out Ro.
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PostPosted: 2014-09-16, 20:43    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Tolle Idee!
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PostPosted: 2014-09-16, 22:25    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Fantastic idea and great haiku both of you!
MORE ! Mr. Green
I can't do haiku.. but I can certainly encourage you all to post them here!!!!
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PostPosted: 2014-09-20, 10:51    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Who's last winter sleep
Who's oatmeal softened belly
Who blows and billows
Only a shakuhachi
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PostPosted: 2014-09-20, 20:25    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2014-09-21, 06:51    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Great idea, thank you.
I have several haiku about playing flute, in Russian, need to translate to publish rhem here ))
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PostPosted: 2014-09-21, 09:51    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Near sea or mountains
Shakuhachi breathes calmly
With sunshine or snow
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PostPosted: 2014-09-21, 18:30    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Nice haiku all. Galina you can publish Russian ones, this is an international forum.
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PostPosted: 2014-09-22, 20:10    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Thank you, Brian.
Not so many Russian speaking participants, but.. Well, ok.

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День на исходе.
Флейтой сдуваю с луны
пену облаков.

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Прямая спина.
Флейтой цепляюсь за жизнь,
и… Цу-Рэ-Чи-Ри!

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Пока разбирал ноты,
жаворонок насвистел
все мои песни.

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Не меч, но флейту
приму из рук мастера,
научусь дышать.
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PostPosted: 2014-09-23, 12:25    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Спасибо, красиво!
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PostPosted: 2014-09-23, 17:45    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

очень хороший действительно! Okay
Я хочу научиться России!
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PostPosted: 2014-09-23, 19:49    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Спасибо, друзья!
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PostPosted: 2014-09-25, 11:47    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

How I enjoyed your poem Galina! The foam clouds rock! 

I put this one through the google translation device; I think it may be called a 'bambusglocke'. The first verse as written, and second as spelled out in English from the Russian translation. I like it, but just for fun. 


Song go 'sing ghoul sing'
Finding things too simple too
groover on the moon


Song go 'sing sing ghoul'
find things too easy too
tapping on the moon
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PostPosted: 2014-09-25, 12:40    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Wind !
My Shakuhachi go to the wild.

Wind !
Say him I love him.

I'll go to the wild
to join him in the wind.
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PostPosted: 2014-09-26, 10:33    Post subject: Spirit of Shakuhachi. Reply with quote

Thank you, Fiona ))

Plume, beautiful ones!
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